Personally I like Ken as of now. From paragraph 1, he's dealing with his grandfather's death, so I give him a huge pass. We'll see if that changes ^^;;.
and still yelling at how we were damn commies and he was going to get us o.@;; Dude, I must say, panhandlers in Boston are much...friendlier? Well, if it's based on real life, I guess I can't challenge the realism of it ^_~.
I can tell that the scene is highly important, and I'm sure you'll explain it in a way that is not "now it is time for some exposition! Let me recap what happened then explain why it is important!" XDXD. I guess what I wanted was more dealing with Ken's thoughts and sensations...dunno if that's possible though o.@;;.
Sure, e-mail tag sounds great! I don't want to bog you down too much, considering the sheer volume you need to write this month, but let me know when's a good time~!
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o.@;; Dude, I must say, panhandlers in Boston are much...friendlier? Well, if it's based on real life, I guess I can't challenge the realism of it ^_~.
I can tell that the scene is highly important, and I'm sure you'll explain it in a way that is not "now it is time for some exposition! Let me recap what happened then explain why it is important!" XDXD. I guess what I wanted was more dealing with Ken's thoughts and sensations...dunno if that's possible though o.@;;.
Sure, e-mail tag sounds great! I don't want to bog you down too much, considering the sheer volume you need to write this month, but let me know when's a good time~!