I finally had to time to comment X_X...and when I'm back at school of all times X_X
Your stories always have the perfect balance of dialogue, descriptive action and thought, which I think is one of the hardest things to do in writing ^_^ HUGHES! Hughes always needs some fic lovin', he's such a great character. (I don't really understand the first one too much since I haven't seen ep17 yet, but I'm about to, today probably ^^;;). And this has already been said but again, having Winry touch on the differences between machines and humanity was a nice touch.
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Date: 2004-03-22 06:19 am (UTC)Your stories always have the perfect balance of dialogue, descriptive action and thought, which I think is one of the hardest things to do in writing ^_^ HUGHES! Hughes always needs some fic lovin', he's such a great character. (I don't really understand the first one too much since I haven't seen ep17 yet, but I'm about to, today probably ^^;;). And this has already been said but again, having Winry touch on the differences between machines and humanity was a nice touch.