Your first smut, *ever?* Damn, woman, don't worry, because it's as lovely and well-written as any of your character pieces. It read so clearly I could see it, and your description--not only of the sex, of course, but of the characters' thoughts and actions, even the room they were in, the way they moved--were insightful, poignant.
I really loved the way you sketched the Roy/Ed relationship. Specifically, I really liked your Ed and how *understanding* he was, how much more mature, because I can really see him becoming that person. And Hughes... ;_; Your Hughes and his happy family life and your Gracia were beautiful.
Gorgeous! More smut would make the world a happier place, but hey, so will any writing of yours, so rock on. ^_-
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Date: 2004-03-30 09:12 am (UTC)I really loved the way you sketched the Roy/Ed relationship. Specifically, I really liked your Ed and how *understanding* he was, how much more mature, because I can really see him becoming that person. And Hughes... ;_; Your Hughes and his happy family life and your Gracia were beautiful.
Gorgeous! More smut would make the world a happier place, but hey, so will any writing of yours, so rock on. ^_-