AHH omg, that was just-- ♥♥♥ I love how you write Roxas and Riku, and how Namine is so, well, Namine! asdhaslfhlsah; sorryiamnotcoherent!
These lines killed me: When Roxas dreams, it's only of fire. "HURRY UP," he bellows, and listens to how his voice echoes back. His hands drop. "... Idiot."
God, my heart bleeds for Roxas. I love how he almost hates to admit he misses Axel. Just, ♥ :D
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Date: 2006-07-05 09:55 pm (UTC)These lines killed me:
When Roxas dreams, it's only of fire.
"HURRY UP," he bellows, and listens to how his voice echoes back. His hands drop. "... Idiot."
God, my heart bleeds for Roxas. I love how he almost hates to admit he misses Axel. Just, ♥ :D